Thursday, September 29, 2016

Making Connections - Rogelio Ceballos


Making Connections


A way that people in the past and now, have connected is through time capsules. Time capsules are items from a period of time put together for others in the future. This Brings people together because people can see what kind of things people experienced through their life. Almost everyone that uses a time capsule is there for a couple of main reasons. They go to, contribute putting in stuff from that period of time, or they can go to observe what kind of things people have picked up during their lifetime.

Time capsules revolutionized communication and human connections by bringing people together for similar reasons. For observing people’s lives and contributing apart of your life for people in the future. Time capsules have been around for many years serving the same purposes they do now.  Even many years ago they served their purpose.

Making Connections by Jonathan Gillespie Average Joes

In Jerusalem there is a Western Wall where people can place their prayers which are believed to  ascend to Heaven through the temple mount. The earliest account of this happening was back in 1937 when a rabbi named Chaim ibn Attar instructed a destitute man to place an amulet in the wall. Since then, this practice has been continued today with there being over a million notes a year in what has now become a custom. There is a dispute though that about whether this is permissible as some argue the practice debases the holiness of the wall. Even then the practice is still continued and the notes are buried twice a year at the Mount of Olives.
People bring in notes of prayer that can be vary from a few words to very long requests and are then placed in the cracks of the wall. There also online services that allow people to send them their notes which they will place in the wall for them. The Rabbi Shmuel Rabinovitch also receives hundreds of letters addressed to god which he places in the wall for them. He is also the one in charge for burying them as him and his followers do this twice a year. This helped revolutionize human connection as you have hundreds to thousands of people coming in everyday placing their prayers in the wall having them all connect through this one great wall.

Making Connections-Richie Bartley-Average Joes

Current Events
Background: As you already learned, “The Writing on the Wall” is an informational text originally printed in the form of a blog. The author uses her blog to comment on social issues that she feels passionately about. This is a very unique form of communication because it allows people to share their thoughts and ideas without the limitations and requirements of using a publisher. This form of communication is, in many ways, similar to the way that the Chinese immigrants she writes about shared their thoughts and ideas: by writing on the wall, they were able to share their thoughts freely with their followers. Through their poems, time and identity are no longer barriers to human connection.

Task: Think of other ways in which people today or in the past have connected across time, distance, and even background through their shared circumstances. Write a two paragraph informational piece commenting on this phenomenon. It can be something modern or from the past. Make sure to discuss the following:
  • Background info (what is it? How did it start?)
  • What is it typically used to communicate? (Are all of the “followers” generally there for the same reason? What brings people to reach out in this form?)
  • How did it revolutionize communication/human connection

A time capsule. Most capsules are buried for a few hundred years. They can be for anyone and sometimes aren’t dug up by who they wanted to. Either way it can hold important things such as a country's riches, to a historic artifact. The oldest time capsule was The Samuel Adams and Paul Revere time capsule.

It started as a way to communicate or send letters, information, or other historic items to people of the future. It’s also a method of communicating with future archaeologists. A time capsule usually has a big event when it is buried in which people bring some of their valuables and place it in the capsule. They also have an event when dug up so the public can see the relics of the past. The time capsule allowed humans to communicate with other humans hundreds of years in the future.

Making connections-Edwin Farley-The Average Joe's

Making Connections
Background: As you already learned, “The Writing on the Wall” is an informational text originally printed in the form of a blog. The author uses her blog to comment on social issues that she feels passionately about. This is a very unique form of communication because it allows people to share their thoughts and ideas without the limitations and requirements of using a publisher. This form of communication is, in many ways, similar to the way that the Chinese immigrants she writes about shared their thoughts and ideas: by writing on the wall, they were able to share their thoughts freely with their followers. Through their poems, time and identity are no longer barriers to human connection.

Task: Think of other ways in which people today or in the past have connected across time, distance, and even background through their shared circumstances. Write a two paragraph informational piece commenting on this phenomenon. It can be something modern or from the past. Make sure to discuss the following:
  • Background info (what is it? How did it start?)
  • What is it typically used to communicate? (Are all of the “followers” generally there for the same reason? What brings people to reach out in this form?)
  • How did it revolutionize communication/human connection

Some ways people today connect to the past is social media and stuff like time capsules. Really social media isn’t all that good at connect to the past, for example snapchat it has no history to look at, and Instagram people don’t bother. I, in my personal opinion think a time capsule is the best way to connect to the past, more of your past. What it is, is either a box or container that can hold personal items or other objects you want to save and/or remember.  When it started it wasn’t called a time capsule, but it was explained, “they made it in 1936, the Crypt of Civilization is acknowledged by the Guinness Book of Records as the first Time Capsule – That means that it is the ‘first successful attempt to bury a record of this culture for any future inhabitants or visitors to the planet Earth’.”.
The way it can communicate is to connect to your past. It is said to be, “the closest we can come to time-travelling – They are a unique way of communicating with future generations through objects from today.”. The reason you’re their to dig it up is to remember and reach out with others to discover/learn what life was like back then and finding the interesting items. It was a revolution to communication with others is by talking to your/others past and respond( not by commenting back but laugh about it with others). It’s like walking in the past and see what others see.

Authors Style: Word Choice- The Average Joes

Author’s Style: Word Choice
Background: Both poems and prose are enhanced by the use of sound devices, such as alliteration, assonance, and consonance. The use of sound devices may emphasize meaning, create a particular mood or express tone.

Task 1: For each of the following words, find a definition and write an example:
  • Alliteration- It is the recurrence of the same letter or sound at the beginning of adjacent or closely connected words. Big Black Beetles bleed black blood.  
  • Assonance- repetition of a sound of a vowel.  In poetry, no one knows what you will write, only you know.  
  • Consonance-an agreement or compatibility between opinions or actions
  • Mood-a temporary state of mind or feeling
  • Tone-the general character or attitude of a place, piece of writing, situation, etc.

Task 2: Find an example of assonance, alliteration, and consonance in “Writing on the Wall.” Then, explain how that sound device enhances the meaning and/or the tone in the text.
consonance-”Even Su Wu was detained among the barbarians,” because there is an agreement that Su Wu is considered a barbarian type personJewish immigration to the Land ...
Alliteration- “...to calm, to communicate, to commiserate, and to conserve.” It enhances the meaning of the text as she was talking about how we are conserving the poems and this gives you a better connection with the poems.   





Assonance- “:to calm, to communicate, to commiserate, to conserve”  This adds to the meaning of, the power of poetry.  
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Tuesday, September 27, 2016

Writing on the Walls-Analyze Craft and Structure-Average Joes


Task: Complete the following. Don’t forget to make it visually appealing and organized!
  1. At what point in “The Writing on the Wall” does Dungy state her central idea? Quote and then restate the idea in your own words.Dungy says the central idea in paragraph 6, when she says what some of the immigrants were going through. “If there were health concerns or irregularities with the paper, if the would be immigrants suffered the chinese exclusion act of 1882, they were sent to a detention center.” This means if anything went wrong they would be sent to a detention center and the author wanted to show how they were treated.
  2. Identify four types of supporting details used in “The Writing on the Wall” (see notes above for types of supporting details). In 1-2 sentences, explain how each develops or refines the central idea. The story mentions the Chinese exclusion Act of 1882 which prohibited the immigration of all Chinese laborers. The reason this supports the story is because it gives us a reason why they were detained. There was a lot of racism in the time period of this story as it quotes “that the European men received comparably better treatment than asian men.” In the beginning of the story he gives us an example of what happened to most Chinese men when they arrived on Ellis Island showing that they were treated unfairly. The author says “The inmates often sigh” as if they were in a prison.

Friday, September 23, 2016

Essential Question- Rogelio Ceballos



Essential Question
Some American rules that Waverly’s family adopted were the rules of chess. Even though at the beginning of the text Waverly’s mother didn’t want to keep it. Waverly says that chess is a game of secrets because, “A little knowledge withheld is a great advantage one should store for future use.” so so basically that knowledge you keep for yourself, you can use to win. I think she loves the secrets because it can possibly help her with chess. I think that Waverly acts like an impatient child because she wants her opponent to accidentally make a wrong move, or something along those lines.
What this section has taught me about being truly American is that you can still be American without being from America. By that I mean, Waverly’s family is a Chinese family is America. They have some American rules and some of their own Chinese rules they hang on to. Chess, in this text, can potentially used as a metaphor for American life by the way Waverly’s mother talks about rules. She says things like judges send you back if you’re from a foreign country and don’t know the American rules. She is comparing the rules we use in chess to the rules that judges in America use.

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Rules of the Game Essential questions Jonathan Gillespie Average Joes

In “Rules of the Game” Waverly’s family do adapt to some American cultures and customs but overall, they keep their own way of life and don’t change from it that much. One major American culture they do celebrate is Christmas. They go to a missionary church where gifts are passed out and that is where they receive the chess set. Mrs.Jong wants to throw away the gift which would be rude to the person who gave it to them but the kids decide to keep it. Waverly’s mom also acts stereotypical at times(which does fit the era they live in as a lot of were) with some examples being when she said,  “Chinese people do business, do medicine, do painting. Not like lazy American people. We do torture. Best torture.”
Waverly though, is the one who I believe adapts the most American customs for when she plays chess. In the story she becomes a national champion and it says, “I was still 429 points away from grandmaster status, but I was touted as the Great American Hope, a child prodigy and a girl to boot .” This shows that she achieves the American dream which is part of our culture as people come here hoping to get big. She also acts like an impatient child to trick her opponents into thinking that the reason she is there is because she is lucky and doesn’t know what she is doing. Chess can also be seen as a metaphor to American life as it is like one giant game  where g you can plan ahead and try to anticipate what your opponent ( who is life) will throw at you and try to counter it.
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Rules of the Game-Essential Question-Richie Bartley-The Average Joes

Essential Question
Write a two paragraph response analyzing this text’s relationship to the unit essential question: what does it mean to be American? In other words, how does this text shed light on this question? To answer this thoroughly, you should also discuss Waverly’s culture and how she and her family fit into (or don’t fit into) American culture/rules. Remember to cite specific lines or instances from the text (minimum 2).
Use the questions below to guide your response: Incorporate your answers into a cohesive, well written response. DO NOT simply answer the questions like you would on a worksheet.
  • What are some "American rules" that Waverly's family adopts? Why is Mrs. Jong willing to adopt them?
  • What are some "Chinese rules" that Waverly's family holds on to?
  • Why does Waverly call chess "a game of secrets in which one must show and never tell"? Why does she love the secrets?
  • Why does Waverly's chess game involve acting as well as skill? Why does she act like an impatient child and pretend to be undecided while playing?
  • What has this section taught you about what makes people feel truly “American?”
  • How is chess potentially a metaphor for American life in this text? (Think about how the text talks about the rules of chess).
When you have finished your response, find three images online that relate to or represent your ideas. Use them as visual aids/decoration on your blog post.

The Jong family adopts the american rules for chess. Mrs. Jong is willing to accept them in order to let her daughter compete in chess tournaments. Waverly shows instead of telling because if you say your next move your opponent will probably counter it. So if you keep your plan of attack a secret you have a better chance at winning. She acts like an impatient child in order deceive her opponents into under estimating her.

Waverly pretends to be undecided so her opponent thinks she doesn’t have a tactic. Chess is a game that shows that americans would battle each other if they didn’t have a government to stop it. Also everyone has a part just like all the chess pieces play their role. Chess also shows that you can’t win right away that you need to work your way to victory. It also shows born to lead while others are born to follow.


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Essential questions-Edwin Farley-The Average Joe's

Essential Question
Write a two paragraph response analyzing this text’s relationship to the unit essential question: what does it mean to be American? In other words, how does this text shed light on this question? To answer this thoroughly, you should also discuss Waverly’s culture and how she and her family fit into (or don’t fit into) American culture/rules. Remember to cite specific lines or instances from the text (minimum 2).
Use the questions below to guide your response: Incorporate your answers into a cohesive, well written response. DO NOT simply answer the questions like you would on a worksheet.
  • What are some "American rules" that Waverly's family adopts? Why is Mrs. Jong willing to adopt them?
  • What are some "Chinese rules" that Waverly's family holds on to?
  • Why does Waverly call chess "a game of secrets in which one must show and never tell"? Why does she love the secrets?
  • Why does Waverly's chess game involve acting as well as skill? Why does she act like an impatient child and pretend to be undecided while playing?
  • What has this section taught you about what makes people feel truly “American?”
  • How is chess potentially a metaphor for American life in this text? (Think about how the text talks about the rules of chess).
When you have finished your response, find three images online that relate to or represent your ideas. Use them as visual aids/decoration on your blog post.


The text “The Rules of the Game” connects to what it means to be an american because Waverly and her family, find a way to fit in the american culture by playing chess. One “American rule” they follow is they celebrate christmas in chinatown, it stated, “We had gone to an annual christmas party held at the first chinese baptist church at the end of the valley.”. They also got a chess set and followed the rules of it, written in and by American. Mrs. Jong adopts the American laws and she is able to live in a chinatown in San Francisco. Some Chinese rules they still follow are they live their natural lifestyles like in the markets it states, “Farther down the street was Ping Yuen Fish Market. The front window displayed a tank crowded with doomed fish and turtles struggling to gain footing on the slimy green-tiled sides. A handwritten sign informed tourists, "Within this store, is all for food, not for pet." Inside, the butchers with their bloodstained white smocks deftly gutted the fish while customers cried out their orders,” and Waverly explained where the kids would often go, “Like most of the other Chinese children who played in the back alleys of restaurants and curio shops,”. They also had down the streets was the smell of red beans, and her mom also stated they do, “Chinese people do business, do medicine, do painting.”.
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Later in the story Waverly begins to learn many things about her chess game, some from her brothers, and some from from an old man. Waverly also calls it, "a game of secrets in which one must show and never tell". Why she calls it that is since in the tournament she can’t tell anyone her tactics, so when they play her they can’t use it against her. She loves these because she finally beat her brothers and enter the tournaments. Waverly game involves acting as well as skill because it needs focus and constant thinking. For example, her first game she explained, “‘Blow from the South,’ it murmured. ‘The wind leaves no trail.’ I saw a clear path, the traps to avoid. The crowd rustled. ‘Shhh! Shhh!’ said the corners of the room. The wind blew stronger. ‘Throw sand from the East to distract him.’ The knight came forward ready for the sacrifice. The wind hissed, louder and louder. ‘Blow, blow, blow. He cannot see. He is blind now. Make him lean away from the wind so he is easier to knock down.’. This her way of focusing and can start using her secrets. In one of her tournaments she acts like a impatient little girl as it states, “ I would clasp my hands under my chin, the delicate points of my elbows poised lightly on the table in the manner my mother had shown me for posing for the press. I would swing my patent leather shoes back and forth like an impatient child riding on a school bus. Then I would pause, suck in my lips, twirl my chosen piece in midair as if undecided, and then firmly plant it in its new threatening place, with a triumphant smile thrown back at my opponent for good measure.”. The reason she did this is to keep her opponents from seeing her next move to somehow use it against her.
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Some parts of the story taught me what it truly means to be an American. It stated, “ My mother would proudly walk with me, visiting many shops, buying very little. ‘This my daughter Wave-ly Jong,’ she said to whoever looked her way. One day after we left a shop I said under my breath, ‘I wish you wouldn't do that, telling everybody I'm your daughter.’ My mother stopped walking. Crowds of people with heavy bags pushed past us on the sidewalk, bumping into first one shoulder, than another. ‘Aii-ya. So shame be with mother?’ She grasped my hand even tighter as she glared at me. I looked down. ‘It's not that, it's just so obvious. It's just so embarrassing.’ ‘Embarrass you be my daughter?’" . This can also relate to the theme as well as the question what does it truly mean to be an American. This means take pride in yourself and what matters to you the most. Waverly’s game of chess, its rules is like a metaphor, they're like the laws you must follow, as stated,” ‘This American rules,’ she concluded at last. ‘Every time people come out from foreign country, must know rules. You not know, judge say, Too bad, go back. They not telling you why so you can use their way go forward.’.”. Her mom related to the chess rules like American rules as they continue to struggle with them. But you always need to follow them.
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